Thursday, February 24, 2011

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It Must Have Been Fun (versions 1 and 2) - by Martine B.

Version 1

Lou did not visit sagrand mater. The sight of all these forms the old super depressed. It sedemandait if to eighty years ago, it would be crazy enough to play Auten as Mamie was still. He hated the practices of another run like madmen temps.Pourquoi enplein sun so they could indulge themselves in any sport in a healthy and conditioned, assistéd'un personal robot that continuously monitors your blood sugar and heart votrerythme? Not quite frankly, he did not understand this generation ...
One Sunday a month at her parents leconduisaient Green & Blue, the residence for seniors where athletes lived sagrand mater. It was an old golf club that had been left abandondans the 2030s, at about the time the exercise to the general airétait fallen into disuse. The old clubhouse is now a bar jusde fruit, restaurant dietético-molecular treatment rooms where officiated a myriad of physios and a sallepolyvalente used mostly for balls, because this little mondeavait yet nimble leg. On the old route had been constructed houses, some shops, a beauty salon and uneentreprise funeral. Everything was organized so that residents have pastrop out of their golden retirement.
Louavait horror of having to embrace the friends of her grandmother, as if that sefaisait yet to embrace the people! Their body odor the inconvenienced and had a holy scared of catching a skin disease. But the worst was when they began to radotersur their past, because they thought it would interest the guys, as they said in their old language. Thus some semainesauparavant they had spoken to a strange place, school. He is past avaitdécouvert not working quietly alone at home on his desk as he did touch, but he had to go into a sordid endroitassez where children were called "students . Onréussissait to bake in a good thirty per class (room minusculedénuée of electronic equipment) and they were carrying bags that weighed a ton when ilsextirpaient related objects, paper. On the finest they copied Deslignes of words using a pen sort of dirtied their fingers. Qandil were wrong, it was toutrecommencer. Reliésétaient Other objects of "books." To read, you had to take each sheet between sesdoigts and turn to scroll the words, a waste of energy tempset Lou had thought. A middle-aged person was also there, and after she scribbled Grandfather tempsen of time on a wooden rectangular black or green Quiétis fixed on one wall. She also got angry when the group devenaitbruyant, and threatened to stick them, but they had already airscotchés on their chairs, so why add more?
Lou remembered a documentary film he visionnépour his history project, in which a humiliated Mr. Perez unepauvre daughter because she had not completed a work called duty, we pourlequel ; scoring. She had been humiliated Supreme, a zero out of twenty. Why twenty elsewhere? Nowadays, all celan'était possible. Lou was planning his own work days and faisaitses exercises at their own pace: they are not forced either to accelerate rythmequand he was tired or slow it down if it was going well. When avaitatteint skill level he passed to the next, simply. Loun'avait never saw the supervisor because he was moving when that was not enfantne objectives or had damaged his office touch, and very studious and Louet Careful with sonmatériel.
In this film, many other détailsavaient intrigued the young boy. The "students", although qu'entassésdans this room did not seem to suffer. They even had air biens'amuser, especially when the adult's back was turned. Some desmessages consulted on their i-phone and answered it, others were chatting off the record, there were also who were holding hands under the tables. Lou avaitégalement observed many échangesde glances, followed by endless giggles. He had promisd'en talking with his grandmother.
Sunday after Grandma had explained his youth Quedan the main interest of boys and girls were deséduire of the opposite sex. We knew we liked to quelqu'unquand you heckled incessantly. It followed a kind of adjacent verbalequi lasted a while, then one day you could not you passerl'un other. Then you kiss, and it was the débutd'une great adventure that made you enter the world of grands.Mamie and Grandpa had known so on schools of the university. Lou's mother was born a few years later. Ilse asked how, in fact, a question still to be elucidated. Now it was still easier, onpratiquait IVF according desétudes forecast needs of industry and finance. This avaitéradiqué very simply another problem to which he formerly avaientparlé his parents, the unemployed. Those who did not comply with cesméthodes had reproductive choice, but their children were doomed Ades menial jobs, like nursing for example. (There are a few rebels avaitencore refractory medically ill.)
Wherereasons people met this totally random, they said they loved each other. Ilsécrivaient texts to express their feelings, or they reported the devive voice. Being in love lesgens put in a strange state, Mamie said they had the "upside down". 'Well, it would be nice!' Retorted Lou. But Mamie avaitrépondu him that this made them happy, and she knew nothing better.
Alone at his desk the next day, Lou had trouble concentrating. It necessit to rethink the words of his grandmother and said that finally, have fun ondevait past.


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few days after the release of version 1, Martin writes that by rereading, she has remorse and sent me version 2, by asking me to substitute one for another. I replied that I publish the two so that everyone can enjoy changes. After all, there is a blog where the writing is moving and not static ... So far it is way!

MW

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Version 2:


Lou did not visit sagrand mater. The sight of all these forms the old super depressed. It sedemandait if to eighty years ago, it would be crazy enough to play Auten as Mamie was still. He hated the practices of another temps.Pourquoi run like madmen enplein sun so we could engage any sport at home in a healthy environment and conditioning, assistéd'un personal robot that continuously monitors your glucose levels and cardiac votrerythme? Not quite frankly, he did not understand this generation ...
One Sunday a month his parents leconduisaient to Green & Blue, the residence where senior athletes sagrand mother lived. It was an old golf club that had been left abandondans the 2030s, at about the time where the general physical airétait fallen into disuse. The old clubhouse is now a bar jusde fruit, restaurant dietético-molecular treatment rooms where officiated a myriad of physios and a sallepolyvalente used mostly for balls, because this little mondeavait yet nimble leg. On the old route had been built houses, few shops, a beauty salon and uneentreprise funeral. Everything was organized so that residents have pastrop out of their golden retirement.
Louavait horror of having to embrace the friends of her grandmother, as if that sefaisait yet to embrace the people! Their body odor the inconvenienced and had a holy scared of catching a skin disease. But worst was when they began to radotersur their past, because they thought it would interest the guys, as they said in their old language. Thus some semainesauparavant they had spoken to a strange place, school. Lou was formerly ainsidécouvert is not working quietly alone at home on his desk touch but needed to travel to a sordid endroitassez where children were called students. We managed to bake in unebonne thirty per class (room devoid of any electronic equipment), andit would be carrying bags that weighed a ton, which ilsextirpaient related objects, paper. Of the more flexible they copiaientdes word lines with a kind of pen they dirtied the doigts.Quand they were mistaken, it was toutrecommencer. Other objects reliésétaient books. To read ilfallait take each leaf between his fingers and turned for fairedéfiler words, a waste of time and energy had thought Lou.Une middle-aged person was also there, and she scribbled time time Surun rectangular wooden board black or green on a fixed Desmurs. She also got angry when the group became noisy and threatening paste them, but they déjàl'air taped to their chairs, so why say more?
Lou remembered a documentary film that had its visionnépour History Project, in which a humiliated Mr. Perez unepauvre daughter because she had not completed a work called duty, we pourlequel obtained a score. She received the ultimate humiliation, a zero out of twenty. Why twenty elsewhere? Nowadays, all celan'était possible. Lou was planning his own work days and faisaitses exercises at their own pace: they are not forced or accelerate alorsqu'il was tired, or if slow progressing well. When avaitatteint skill level he passed to the next, simply. Loun'avait never saw the supervisor because he was moving when that was not meeting its objectives enfantne or had damaged his office tactile and Louet studious and very careful with sonmatériel.
In this film, many other détailsavaient intrigued the young boy. Students, qu'entassés well in cettepièce, did not seem to suffer. They even seem to have fun, especially when the adult's back was turned. Some of the consulted messagessur their i-phone and answered it, others were chatting off the record, there avaitaussi who held hands under the tables. Lou was also observed numerous regardscomplices trade, followed endless giggles. He had promised to parleravec his grandmother.
Sunday after Grandma had explained his youth Quedan the main interest of boys and girls were deséduire of the opposite sex. We knew we liked to quelqu'unquand you heckled incessantly. It followed a kind of adjacent verbalequi lasted a while, then one day we could no longer without each other. Then qu'ons'embrassait, and it was the beginning of a wonderful adventure that you faisaitentrer in the world of adults. Grandma and Grandpa had known way, on the benches of the university. Themother Lou was born a few years later. He wondered well how, indeed, still a matter elucidated. Now it was still more simple, we practiced IVF basisof studies looking besoinsde of industry and finance. It was eradicated in a very simple problem once anadditional which he had talked his parents, the unemployed. Ceuxqui did not comply with these methods of reproduction had lechoix, but their children were doomed to menial jobs such as nursing fromLondon example. (There were a few rebels auxmédicaliments refractory to fall ill.)
Wherereasons people met this totally random, they said they loved each other. Ilsécrivaient texts to express their feelings , or when they declared devive voice. Being in love lesgens put in a strange state, Mamie said they had head upside down. 'Well, it was êtrebeau!' Retorted Lou. But Grandma had replied that lesrendait happy, and she knew nothing better.
Alone at his desk the next day Lou had trouble concentrating. It necessit to rethink the words of his grandmother and said that finally, have fun ondevait past.





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